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		<title>Comment on The Rise of Collectives by Dan Holloway</title>
		<link>http://www.spiraltruth.com/2009/10/the-rise-of-collectives/comment-page-1/#comment-287</link>
		<dc:creator>Dan Holloway</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Jan 2010 21:39:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sorry it&#039;s taken so long to say hi and leave a comment. I have a feeling you wrote this when we were still in our infancy at Year Zero. Since then we&#039;ve started blogging, leaving new fiction on our site every day. We&#039;ve also got together to tour our new anthology. And that kind of gets to the heart of what&#039;s great about collectives for us - they&#039;re a place where you can connect and find support and people who are different enough that you don&#039;t become homogenous yet ask enough of the same questoins that you can push each others&#039; work more. They&#039;re also a place for connecting with readers - and moving into - albeit in brief forays - the real world is a way to expand all those connections - storytelling is, after all, about engaging readers. 

This is also why we&#039;re not on the lookout for new members - the chemistry of a collective is its most important point. For us, compiling our latest anthology, 13 Shadows Waiting for Sunrise, has been a revelation. We&#039;ve grown as individual writers through collectively looking at one or two things. But you&#039;re right - a collective&#039;s biggest threat is stasis, self-satisfaction. So new blood is always good, and it&#039;s inevitable that people will move on - some will (shudder) get an agent and decide to go the mainstream route. Others will move jobs, change life circumstances, or decide to write about orchid growing. What matters is keeping the group&#039;s inner life vibrant, which means staying true to the collective&#039;s ideals - in our case, delivering quality fiction direct to readers. For that, a balancing act of continuity and change is essential.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sorry it&#8217;s taken so long to say hi and leave a comment. I have a feeling you wrote this when we were still in our infancy at Year Zero. Since then we&#8217;ve started blogging, leaving new fiction on our site every day. We&#8217;ve also got together to tour our new anthology. And that kind of gets to the heart of what&#8217;s great about collectives for us &#8211; they&#8217;re a place where you can connect and find support and people who are different enough that you don&#8217;t become homogenous yet ask enough of the same questoins that you can push each others&#8217; work more. They&#8217;re also a place for connecting with readers &#8211; and moving into &#8211; albeit in brief forays &#8211; the real world is a way to expand all those connections &#8211; storytelling is, after all, about engaging readers. </p>
<p>This is also why we&#8217;re not on the lookout for new members &#8211; the chemistry of a collective is its most important point. For us, compiling our latest anthology, 13 Shadows Waiting for Sunrise, has been a revelation. We&#8217;ve grown as individual writers through collectively looking at one or two things. But you&#8217;re right &#8211; a collective&#8217;s biggest threat is stasis, self-satisfaction. So new blood is always good, and it&#8217;s inevitable that people will move on &#8211; some will (shudder) get an agent and decide to go the mainstream route. Others will move jobs, change life circumstances, or decide to write about orchid growing. What matters is keeping the group&#8217;s inner life vibrant, which means staying true to the collective&#8217;s ideals &#8211; in our case, delivering quality fiction direct to readers. For that, a balancing act of continuity and change is essential.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Motivational Posters from Dr. Gonzo! by Dr Gonzo</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dr Gonzo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Jul 2009 00:24:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>very true...acid finds people</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>very true&#8230;acid finds people</p>
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		<title>Comment on How the e-book will change us&#8230; for real this time. by Peter Jurmu</title>
		<link>http://www.spiraltruth.com/2009/04/how-the-e-book-will-change-us-for-real-this-time/comment-page-1/#comment-89</link>
		<dc:creator>Peter Jurmu</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 01 May 2009 19:53:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>David, is that picture of the Kindle 2?  The buttons appear to be in the wrong places.  The dimensions are still essentially the same, but the new release is significantly improved over the first. (Enough so, anyway, for O&#039;Reilly to &lt;a href=&quot;http://toc.oreilly.com/2009/04/over-160-oreilly-books-now-in-kindle-store-without-drm-more-on-the-way.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;start selling their previously open-.mobi ebooks&lt;/a&gt; in the Kindle Store without DRM.)  Even so, I still like the look of the Plastic Logic reader better, and Sony&#039;s PRS-700 remains the sexiest of the lot.

Ebooks have received strange print press over the past two weeks.  First, this article in the &lt;i&gt;WSJ&lt;/i&gt; that takes a gee-whiz approach to matters that &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.shirky.com/weblog/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;are&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href=&quot;http://toc.oreilly.com&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;constantly&lt;/a&gt; and &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.readerville.com/index.php/blog/view/ebook-dreams-from-days-of-yore/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;exhaustively&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href=&quot;http://booksquare.com/google-book-search-and-reader-privacy-a-consideration-and-call-to-action/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;discussed&lt;/a&gt; &lt;a href=&quot;http://thedigitalist.net/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;online&lt;/a&gt;, usually absent from the writing of someone that embraces brevity (like Walter Mossberg, ostensibly the &lt;i&gt;WSJ&lt;/i&gt;&#039;s tech columnist), and then this past week a bizarre article in the &lt;i&gt;New York Times&lt;/i&gt;&#039; &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.nytimes.com/2009/04/26/fashion/26kindle.html?_r=2&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Fashion &amp; Style&lt;/a&gt; section.  An excerpt from the latter: &quot;And as books migrate from paper, it means the death of the pickup line, &#039;Oh, I see you&#039;re reading the latest (insert highbrow title here).&#039;&quot;

When I read the above quote, I quickly checked the page header to make sure I was still reading the &lt;i&gt;Times&lt;/i&gt; and hadn&#039;t been bumped to some other site.  I completely understand that, to many, ereaders fall on aesthetic, and not utilitarian (at least not until they actually fork over the money for one), concerns, but the rest of the &lt;i&gt;Times&lt;/i&gt;&#039; article is about as informative about either as that quote.  Joe Wikert over at &lt;a href=&quot;http://kindleville.blogspot.com/2009/04/new-york-times-laments-forward-progress.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Kindleville&lt;/a&gt; had a good time carving a jack-o-lantern out of the expressed sentiments.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>David, is that picture of the Kindle 2?  The buttons appear to be in the wrong places.  The dimensions are still essentially the same, but the new release is significantly improved over the first. (Enough so, anyway, for O&#8217;Reilly to <a href="http://toc.oreilly.com/2009/04/over-160-oreilly-books-now-in-kindle-store-without-drm-more-on-the-way.html" rel="nofollow">start selling their previously open-.mobi ebooks</a> in the Kindle Store without DRM.)  Even so, I still like the look of the Plastic Logic reader better, and Sony&#8217;s PRS-700 remains the sexiest of the lot.</p>
<p>Ebooks have received strange print press over the past two weeks.  First, this article in the <i>WSJ</i> that takes a gee-whiz approach to matters that <a href="http://www.shirky.com/weblog/" rel="nofollow">are</a> <a href="http://toc.oreilly.com" rel="nofollow">constantly</a> and <a href="http://www.readerville.com/index.php/blog/view/ebook-dreams-from-days-of-yore/" rel="nofollow">exhaustively</a> <a href="http://booksquare.com/google-book-search-and-reader-privacy-a-consideration-and-call-to-action/" rel="nofollow">discussed</a> <a href="http://thedigitalist.net/" rel="nofollow">online</a>, usually absent from the writing of someone that embraces brevity (like Walter Mossberg, ostensibly the <i>WSJ</i>&#8217;s tech columnist), and then this past week a bizarre article in the <i>New York Times</i>&#8216; <a href="http://www.nytimes.com/2009/04/26/fashion/26kindle.html?_r=2" rel="nofollow">Fashion &amp; Style</a> section.  An excerpt from the latter: &#8220;And as books migrate from paper, it means the death of the pickup line, &#8216;Oh, I see you&#8217;re reading the latest (insert highbrow title here).&#8217;&#8221;</p>
<p>When I read the above quote, I quickly checked the page header to make sure I was still reading the <i>Times</i> and hadn&#8217;t been bumped to some other site.  I completely understand that, to many, ereaders fall on aesthetic, and not utilitarian (at least not until they actually fork over the money for one), concerns, but the rest of the <i>Times</i>&#8216; article is about as informative about either as that quote.  Joe Wikert over at <a href="http://kindleville.blogspot.com/2009/04/new-york-times-laments-forward-progress.html" rel="nofollow">Kindleville</a> had a good time carving a jack-o-lantern out of the expressed sentiments.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Publishing Odyssey IV: Reject! by Peter Jurmu</title>
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		<dc:creator>Peter Jurmu</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Feb 2009 21:49:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey, David.  There&#039;s an excellent David Foster Wallace quote about that Gerard-Jones bitterness/hubris bit:

&quot;There&#039;s a fallacy that some of my friends sometimes fall into, the ol&#039; &#039;The audience is stupid.  The audience only wants to go this deep.  Poor us, we&#039;re marginalized because of TV, the great hypnotic blah, blah.&#039;  You can sit around and have these pity parties for yourself.  Of course this is bullshit.  If an art form is marginalized it&#039;s because it&#039;s not speaking to people.  One possible reason is that the people it&#039;s speaking to have become too stupid to appreciate it.  That seems a little easy to me.&quot;

I received a rejection letter two weeks ago for some poems I&#039;d been pretty self-satisfied about when I submitted them to a lit journal.  I was a little surprised that the journal hadn&#039;t wanted them, but what surprised me more was the brief stab of indignation.  &quot;Those fools!  What do they know?&quot;  The brief imp-tap of that special arrogance of those who believe they&#039;ve been slighted.  Then I reread the poems, since cigarettes weren&#039;t handy, and it took me only about a minute to be embarrassed of my reaction.  Of course they didn&#039;t want them.  Their prosody was all over the place, only one or two of them were actually somewhat strong, and anyway none of them were anything like what the pub had desired for their late-winter issue.  Amazing what a change of perspective a couple months brings to your own work.

It seems old-hat to cite &lt;i&gt;On Writing&lt;/i&gt; by Stephen King, since everyone does, but he did something interesting with his rejection letters, when they began pouring in: he posted them on the wall of his workspace to remind himself of the importance of always improving, and to keep himself humble in the event of any success.

Anyway, good luck with your query revision, and the next step, whatever it entails.  I originally started reading your articles in January because I was checking out web mentions of Creative Byline, where I work.  If you&#039;re doing more research on publishers, or have questions about us specifically, I&#039;m glad to help out in any way I can.

Best,
Peter</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, David.  There&#8217;s an excellent David Foster Wallace quote about that Gerard-Jones bitterness/hubris bit:</p>
<p>&#8220;There&#8217;s a fallacy that some of my friends sometimes fall into, the ol&#8217; &#8216;The audience is stupid.  The audience only wants to go this deep.  Poor us, we&#8217;re marginalized because of TV, the great hypnotic blah, blah.&#8217;  You can sit around and have these pity parties for yourself.  Of course this is bullshit.  If an art form is marginalized it&#8217;s because it&#8217;s not speaking to people.  One possible reason is that the people it&#8217;s speaking to have become too stupid to appreciate it.  That seems a little easy to me.&#8221;</p>
<p>I received a rejection letter two weeks ago for some poems I&#8217;d been pretty self-satisfied about when I submitted them to a lit journal.  I was a little surprised that the journal hadn&#8217;t wanted them, but what surprised me more was the brief stab of indignation.  &#8220;Those fools!  What do they know?&#8221;  The brief imp-tap of that special arrogance of those who believe they&#8217;ve been slighted.  Then I reread the poems, since cigarettes weren&#8217;t handy, and it took me only about a minute to be embarrassed of my reaction.  Of course they didn&#8217;t want them.  Their prosody was all over the place, only one or two of them were actually somewhat strong, and anyway none of them were anything like what the pub had desired for their late-winter issue.  Amazing what a change of perspective a couple months brings to your own work.</p>
<p>It seems old-hat to cite <i>On Writing</i> by Stephen King, since everyone does, but he did something interesting with his rejection letters, when they began pouring in: he posted them on the wall of his workspace to remind himself of the importance of always improving, and to keep himself humble in the event of any success.</p>
<p>Anyway, good luck with your query revision, and the next step, whatever it entails.  I originally started reading your articles in January because I was checking out web mentions of Creative Byline, where I work.  If you&#8217;re doing more research on publishers, or have questions about us specifically, I&#8217;m glad to help out in any way I can.</p>
<p>Best,<br />
Peter</p>
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		<title>Comment on Creative Commons 101 by Creative Commons 101 &#124; discontinuedgames.com</title>
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		<dc:creator>Creative Commons 101 &#124; discontinuedgames.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Dec 2008 12:44:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on It&#8217;s the constitution, stupid! by Itâ€™s the constitution, stupid! &#124; debtrecruitment.com</title>
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		<dc:creator>Itâ€™s the constitution, stupid! &#124; debtrecruitment.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Dec 2008 11:02:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on Sound of My Voice by LoveBunny</title>
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		<dc:creator>LoveBunny</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Oct 2008 18:49:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>thank you david - you are a voice in the void for me.

thanks for understanding.

oot</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>thank you david &#8211; you are a voice in the void for me.</p>
<p>thanks for understanding.</p>
<p>oot</p>
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		<title>Comment on Send Michael Moore to fix the Wall Street meltdown&#8230; he&#8217;s actually got some pretty good ideas! by Mike Harmon</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mike Harmon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Oct 2008 01:37:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Where did you get your blog layout from?  I&#039;d like to get one like it for my blog.</description>
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